Reduced wordiness and formality #6
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👍 I like the changes |
| @@ -27,7 +27,7 @@ <h3 class="subtitle">Come by and see what we are all about.</h3> | |||
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| <h3>Community</h3> | |||
| <p>Learn from other students and explore new opportunities right here on campus.</p> | |||
| <p>Join your peers and ignite RIT's hacking culture.</p> | |||
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I like the learn from other student's part as it hints at the workshops we plan on doing. Maybe change it to "Learn from your peers". I really like the "ignite RIT's hacking culture part".
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Agreed. I'll make the change
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I mean if someone gets into a hack in the south, west, or midwest, then by all means they should go if they want to. It shouldn't be based on the hackathons that a select few of us want to attend. |
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Ready for merge? |
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Reduced wordiness and formality
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Almost entirely subjective